Business law paper urgent | Business & Finance homework help

Business law needs answering very urgent in one day. Not much work needed though. I only want to achieve passing grade(found in assignment brief. 

Attached is the paper brief in which you have to provide legal solutions to two different scenarios. Another attachment is my attempt at answering the paper which did not get me a passing grade. 

I also attached my friend’s attempt which achieved a passing grade

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